Two more stories have been added to the Finished Stories section!
You can check them out here:
Detention
The S-Virus Mutation
As usual, feel free to leave comments and criticism. Everything is appreciated!
Luffles,
Onyxdime xx
Sunday 29 September 2013
Monday 9 September 2013
Chatrooms and Maps!
Ground Floor
Second Floor
Basement
Hope to see you all at 9pm GMT!
I will be telling the stories this here tonight!
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Sunday 8 September 2013
Detention update!
Hey guys,
'Detention' is going to be told at 9pm GMT on September 9th!
I am currently looking into a chatroom that we could use for the event, any and all suggestions are welcome. I might run it on 4chan, still thinking about it. At the minute I'd say I'm about 60% likely to use a chatroom.
Looking forward to seeing if you guys can survive this game like you did in Suzi's Mansion ;)
(Don't worry if you lose, you can always try again. I'll just restart the game.)
Luffles,
Onyxdime xx
'Detention' is going to be told at 9pm GMT on September 9th!
I am currently looking into a chatroom that we could use for the event, any and all suggestions are welcome. I might run it on 4chan, still thinking about it. At the minute I'd say I'm about 60% likely to use a chatroom.
Looking forward to seeing if you guys can survive this game like you did in Suzi's Mansion ;)
(Don't worry if you lose, you can always try again. I'll just restart the game.)
Luffles,
Onyxdime xx
Wednesday 4 September 2013
Monsters, Magic, and Molestation, Oh My!
The past few days have been spent finalizing the plot for 'Detention' (It's gonna be fantastic!) and gathering my new team together. It has been extremely busy, I've now received emails from over 110 different people wanting to know more about these stories, offering criticism, and giving me great ideas.
Thanks to all of you!
The only question that we need answered before that is: Where will we host the story?
I'd appreciate it if you guys filled in the poll below for me and let me know where you would like the story to be told. Bare in mind that this poll will not be binding upon us; and we will host the story where we think is the best place to ensure quality for everyone who wants to enjoy the story.
Luffles,
Thanks to all of you!
In the meantime I thought I would give you a few teasers about what you can expect from 'Detention.'
- There will be between 25-35 possibly monsters that you can encounter in the game.
- In addition, there will be non-hostile NPC's, puzzles, and tests.
- The game will feature a brand new combat system!
- The old orgasm system is being replaced by two new meters. The first of these is the 'Arousal meter' which has several stages ranging from 'normal' through to 'soaking pussy.' The Arousal meter can also run in a negative direction with values such as 'terrified' and 'frigid This determines how horny your character is. The second is the Orgasm meter which runs from '0-100%.'
It is possible to be fully aroused without having an orgasm e.g. if you are drugged or really turned on by something you see. And it is also possible to have an unwanted orgasm when your Arousal meter is in a negative range. (Imagine you are being raped by two zombies; you are terrified, but all the while as they thrust into your pussy, rubbing against your clitoris you can't help but feel an orgasm building. You try hard to avoid it, but it soon washes over you and in shame you find yourself climaxing over an undead's cock.) - An in-depth story with a lot of player freedom; defeated enemies are now usually lootable!
Lootable items; hording lots of shit ftw!
I previously mentioned that I would have trouble writing a fantasy story, but three things have recently happened that might allow me to actually run one (for all you fantasy geeks out there!)
1. I got an awesome guy on my team who knows his fantasy shit.
2. I got myself a copy of "Monster Manual" and I'm sure I can rework at least half of these into decent fantasy enemies!
3. I might be on to a decent idea for a fantasy story!
Detention will be told on the 9th September 2013. We are not sure of the exact time yet, but will let you know by the 6th September.
The only question that we need answered before that is: Where will we host the story?
I'd appreciate it if you guys filled in the poll below for me and let me know where you would like the story to be told. Bare in mind that this poll will not be binding upon us; and we will host the story where we think is the best place to ensure quality for everyone who wants to enjoy the story.
In other news, I'm setting up a Twitter account and forum soon, so you won't ever miss a story again ;)
Luffles,
Onyxdime xx
Monday 2 September 2013
That Was A Disaster
Many of you will have saw the story I hosted on /b/ this morning.
If you didn't manage to make it to the thread, don't worry. It was shit.
I've reviewed the story a few times now, spoken to several readers, and listed what I consider to be the main problems:
1. Repetitive combat.
Abigail got up and fell down five times in a row. Five. Fucking. Times. That isn't fun. That isn't erotic. It is boring.
2. Drawn out combat.
Five fucking repetitions of the same action. Not sexy, not fun, not a good story. 90% of the story took place in one room. The combat shouldn't have lasted as long as it did.
3. Piss poor planning.
This story was improvised. Without planning the storyline was weak, monsters were boring and unimaginative, and the protagonist was two dimensional.
4. Human errors.
I made far too many mistakes when editing stats, posting which items of clothing were destroyed/damaged, and allowed far too many inconsistencies to occur. (Her panties were pulled down when she was still wearing her shorts.)
In response to these I am drawing up a 5 point plan to ensure that in future my stories are of a far higher quality. Even higher quality than what you experienced when you enjoyed Jessie's Chateau and Suzi's Mansion.
If you didn't manage to make it to the thread, don't worry. It was shit.
I've reviewed the story a few times now, spoken to several readers, and listed what I consider to be the main problems:
1. Repetitive combat.
Abigail got up and fell down five times in a row. Five. Fucking. Times. That isn't fun. That isn't erotic. It is boring.
2. Drawn out combat.
Five fucking repetitions of the same action. Not sexy, not fun, not a good story. 90% of the story took place in one room. The combat shouldn't have lasted as long as it did.
3. Piss poor planning.
This story was improvised. Without planning the storyline was weak, monsters were boring and unimaginative, and the protagonist was two dimensional.
4. Human errors.
I made far too many mistakes when editing stats, posting which items of clothing were destroyed/damaged, and allowed far too many inconsistencies to occur. (Her panties were pulled down when she was still wearing her shorts.)
In response to these I am drawing up a 5 point plan to ensure that in future my stories are of a far higher quality. Even higher quality than what you experienced when you enjoyed Jessie's Chateau and Suzi's Mansion.
- First and most importantly; I rang up my internet provider today and requested a stronger connection. One that would not randomly cut off like it did today. (To all the anon's today in the Officer Abigail thread, I am truly sorry. I have never bailed on a story so far on /b/ and I have no intention of doing so again in the future.) This will be fixed, enabling me to keep delivering you long story sessions.
- Properly plan the stories out.
The Jessie and Suzi stories were great. Why? Because I planned them out. I spent hours designing monsters with unique attacks. Erotacacti, the buzzing anal bugs, the skeleton hands, the mirror being. These were good ideas that were the result of time being invested in my work. I learnt today that poor planning creates piss stories. - There was too much fighting and not enough dying. Fights should last a maximum of 5 turns I reckon. By this point they should naturally end with you being raped, you escaping, or you killing the creature. I will be reworking the combat system to ensure that it is more streamlined.
- Threads on 4Chan aren't working atm. The problems are threefold: Anon's cheating on their rolls, trolls spamming the threads, and horny teens going through puberty posting idiotic shit which is ruining it for those who want to enjoy the story/game as well as the erotic content.
I am going to host stories on chatrooms from now on. This should allow for several great advantages:
-No samefags.
-Multiple player characters!
-Blocking of trolls.
-No 404's!
-Quicker replies to stories (No captcha!) - Finally, I am looking to recruit two volunteers to help me plan, perform and write stories.
If you are interested please write to onyxdime@gmail.com. I will get back to you with a few questions, we'll have a short chat and I'll let you know if you make the cut.
Once again, I apologise for today's appalling thread and story. The erotic story community, /B/, and my readers all deserve a higher standard of story than the shitty drivel that was written today.
The next major story will be held on September 9th. This will be the story you voted for, 'Detention' and will feature a possible 30 new monsters to encounter. I consider at least 10 of these to be extremely unique, and another 10 to be fairly unique. I hope that this, combined with the new combat system and use of a proper chatroom will deliver a far superior experience.
Luffles and apologies,
Onyxdime xx
Detention Fetish Poll
Guys, let me know what fetishes you would like to see most in this new game. ;)
Sunday 1 September 2013
Detention
It seems that Detention is already the winner in this online poll!
I will be hosting a game of Detention in the coming days, keep an eye on this blog for further details.
In this story you will play Delilah Foxglove, an 18 year old girl serving an after school detention. However, she soon finds herself locked in as the school closes up for the weekend, and the teachers seemingly forget about her.
Now she is trapped inside as darkness falls and many evil creatures begin to stalk her through the corridors and classrooms.
Her is a preview of two of the new monsters that will be in this story...
'The Formless Spirit'
This was once a being that was human, but has long had its soul removed. In order to experience any human feelings it must choose a host to reside within. Once it has achieved a vessel it can then experience all the pleasure, pain, and ecstasy that only a physical form can bring.
'The Possessed Cheerleaders'
The possessed cheerleader squad had been staying late for practice. Unfortunately when the darkness came over the school they were inside. Now they roam around the school's *********** waiting for a victim to come in that they can play with.
As always, if you guys have any fetishes you REALLY like, or great ideas for monsters, send them in! I'll gladly put almost anything in one of my stories as long as it fits contextually. (e.g. no monsters that would seem completely out of place...)
Who knows, you might have the joy of watching Delilah get abused by your very own creation ;)
Luffles,
Onyxdime xx
I will be hosting a game of Detention in the coming days, keep an eye on this blog for further details.
In this story you will play Delilah Foxglove, an 18 year old girl serving an after school detention. However, she soon finds herself locked in as the school closes up for the weekend, and the teachers seemingly forget about her.
Now she is trapped inside as darkness falls and many evil creatures begin to stalk her through the corridors and classrooms.
Her is a preview of two of the new monsters that will be in this story...
'The Formless Spirit'
This was once a being that was human, but has long had its soul removed. In order to experience any human feelings it must choose a host to reside within. Once it has achieved a vessel it can then experience all the pleasure, pain, and ecstasy that only a physical form can bring.
'The Possessed Cheerleaders'
The possessed cheerleader squad had been staying late for practice. Unfortunately when the darkness came over the school they were inside. Now they roam around the school's *********** waiting for a victim to come in that they can play with.
As always, if you guys have any fetishes you REALLY like, or great ideas for monsters, send them in! I'll gladly put almost anything in one of my stories as long as it fits contextually. (e.g. no monsters that would seem completely out of place...)
Who knows, you might have the joy of watching Delilah get abused by your very own creation ;)
Luffles,
Onyxdime xx
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